Fired and dumped, a directionless young man takes a pizza delivery job, but when he is mistakenly given the kiss of death by a psychotic mafia boss, he must outsmart the mob to survive and save the love of his life.

    Logliner Posted on April 19, 2020 in Comedy.
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      There is no indication that the “love of his life” is in danger or in need of being saved. You can tighten up the logline by dropping that part:

      When a down-and-out pizza delivery man is mistakenly given the kiss of death by a psychotic mafia boss, he must outsmart the mob to survive.

       

      Mentor Answered on April 19, 2020.
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