An overnight caregiver and a bored stiff succubus form an unlikely alliance to launch a dark web speed dating site.
Neither of the characters seems flawed in a way that implies a journey of change, and at the same time (like Richiev said) there appear to be very little stakes and conflict.
According to the logline, the two meet, agree on their terms of collaboration and launch a dating website – end of story. How will that be dramatic? What force is opposing them? And how will they internally change as a result?
I would like to see some description of the two characters that give us an indication as to why they have both decided to go on this adventure together. Other questions I have are:
What are their intentions for setting up this site? If the caregiver is the main character, perhaps he/she has good intentions which the succubus exploits and then conflict arises between the two later on?
Do they both plan to put it on the dark web initially or is there a deception involved? I don’t see a caregiver being someone who would know much about/ care much for the dark web.