RE: It’s 2151 and a bio scientist finds herself in the middle of the largest coverup in history. She begins a race against time to expose her former CEO?s deceit or else mankind changes forever.

      Bbass74 Penpusher Posted on May 14, 2020 in Thriller.
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        After reading your response here is my take:
        Protagonist: A bioscientist.
        Goal: Expose her companies deadly engineered humans coverup.
        Antagonist: Bad company.
        Stakes: Mankind ruled by the companies engineered humans.

         

        In 2151 a cornered bioscientist must expose her companies deadly coverup to control the government using engineered humans before society is changed forever.

        Samurai Answered on May 16, 2020.

        Thanks Odie. You have it down except shouldn’t the CEO be mentioned since he’s the brainchild for the scheme? The company itself is legit and most in the company have no idea what’s happening, it’s only the CEO and few select people that know of the deceitful plan.

        on May 17, 2020.

        Hmm, OK.

        How about:
        In 2151 a cornered bioscientist must expose a deadly clandestine group within her company ran by a ruthless CEO that plans to control the government using engineered humans before society is changed forever.

        I think it is getting there ? please fill in my liberties and gaps with your story point to polish.

        Take care.

        on May 17, 2020.

        Thanks! I think it?s a great foundation, may just change some wording but it?s focused, I appreciate the help!

        on May 18, 2020.
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