RE: A teenage loner meets his first love during lucid dreams and will have to choose between dream and reality, to be awaken without her or to never wake up.

      officialfrankromeo Penpusher Posted on May 8, 2020 in Romance.
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        I think this is a really good concept. Well done.?It just needs to be sharpened up I reckon.?

        It certainly ticks a lot of boxes of a marketable concept:

        1. It?s unique and universal. (we?ve all been a teenager and been in love.)

        2. Interesting dilemma – real life or dreams.

        3. Odd couple.?

        4. Unique hook – the dream girl.

        5. Interesting inciting event – hero masters (?) lucid dreaming.

        6. Fish out of water – kind of like Splash right? He enters into her dream world. She genuinely is a manic pixie dream girl.

        7. Protagonist’s arc is suggested: from loner to infatuated/lovelorn (?).

        8. It’s quite high concept/X meets Y. I’d say… AVATAR meets (maybe a teen romance? I keep thinking SPLASH because of the fish out of water angle.)

        Reminds me of this quote from Karate Kid part II:

        If I am dreaming, let me never awaken. If I am awake, let me never sleep.?

        Mentor Answered on May 8, 2020.
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